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Post by rbvbandrox on Aug 2, 2007 12:14:31 GMT -5
I have written this poem, and wanted to share it with ya'll. But please don't try to claim it as your own-it's copywrited!
MARCHING BAND:
The gravel under your feet walking in The smiles when you've seen your friends The moaning of us going out to the field The chant of numbers as we stretch The drum majors telling us to get our acts together The soft thud as we go down to do pushups The excited cheer as we end practice The nervousness as we load the busses The silent breaths we take when waiting The sound of our directors giving us a pep talk The noise of the audience before we start The audience giving us a standing ovation The coldness of our ears sitting in the stands The prayer that we got a good placement The hopefulness as the awards are announced The yelling and screaming when we get Sweepstakes The happiness we see in ourselves and our directors The hugs given to your friends and even your enemies But most importantly... The feeling of Achievement
[Catherine Rose Trotter]
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Post by trumpetspride on Aug 2, 2007 16:38:45 GMT -5
That's good! I got the chills reading it!
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Post by lightningflute2010 on Aug 2, 2007 17:37:16 GMT -5
That's really good! Could I write that down and post it in my band room if I keep your name on it? I think my BD would like it.
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Post by rbvbandrox on Aug 2, 2007 19:22:28 GMT -5
That's really good! Could I write that down and post it in my band room if I keep your name on it? I think my BD would like it. totally! anyone can use it-but they just can't claim that THEY wrote it...lol
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Post by marchingbandfreak on Aug 2, 2007 22:07:31 GMT -5
most of it, so us WHS Blue Devils! XD
But so true to every MB!
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Post by lobodrummajor on Aug 2, 2007 23:10:37 GMT -5
Inspiring poem very nice. i might just show it to my band and director. it is so totally true also.
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Post by lobodrummajor on Aug 2, 2007 23:11:18 GMT -5
Inspiring poem very nice. i might just show it to my band and director. it is so totally true also.
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Post by rbvbandrox on Aug 3, 2007 12:33:39 GMT -5
yea, the key word there being INSPIRE. I wrote it last year, but it is great for this years show-which is titled Inspire! (or something like that)
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Post by bariclaribob on Aug 3, 2007 16:42:43 GMT -5
It's really good! Do you have any for parade bands?
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Post by rbvbandrox on Aug 4, 2007 11:42:39 GMT -5
It's really good! Do you have any for parade bands? hmmm...i'm good at writing poetry, so i'll try to write one, ok? i'm not making any promises, though. whenever our band tried to do parade, we would fail miserably!!!!
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Post by trumpetislife on Aug 4, 2007 16:41:01 GMT -5
thats really good! ;D
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Post by brassgirl1023 on Aug 4, 2007 19:58:10 GMT -5
cool! Except that we just had band camp at my school this year. And we only march on grass or when we go inside, the gym.
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Post by bandislife on Aug 4, 2007 20:10:07 GMT -5
Awesome band-ish poetic-ness. Very, very awesome ^.^
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Post by rbvbandrox on Aug 6, 2007 12:29:58 GMT -5
cool! Except that we just had band camp at my school this year. And we only march on grass or when we go inside, the gym. [glow=red,2,300] hahaha! my band is starting today... [/glow]
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Post by SaxGirl on Aug 6, 2007 13:09:26 GMT -5
I wrote a band poem once. It sucked. I deleted it off of my deviantART, haha. But I really like yours. It captures all the confusing feelings of marching band, and the final outcome. Very nice job!
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